I have now received feedback from my tutor on my final assignment. Overall I’m fairly happy with the comments; he did say in the summary “this has been a good assignment and a fitting end to the module”. So that is something to be pleased with.
The main area where I fell down was in not having read the assignment brief thoroughly. I concentrated too much on constructing and taking the photos and too little on what the assignment was saying about it being for a magazine. I should have produced a mock up of a magazine cover and an article (even without the text) to show that I understood the brief and taken photos accordingly.
I have since produced a mock magazine cover and article which can be seen here.