The feedback from my tutor on the fourth assignment was generally positive.
The main areas of comment included how I had structured the essay, not a good thing to use bullet points, and a lot of one sentence paragraphs. So I will amend the essay to take these points on board.
My discussion on the composition of the photograph was not well received.I agree with the points being made about where I was talking about ‘harmonious composition’ and I will rewrite this section to focus more on the narrative aspect. The diagrams I included were described as ‘tedious’ and ‘banal’ so I will remove them from the final version of the assignment.
I will post the revised version of the essay here when I’ve finalised the amendments.