Tutor Feedback on Part 2

I was very pleased with the overall comments made by my tutor, particularly that he thinks I have “advanced in your thinking and approach since the last assignment”. There were other positive points too, but I think that you learn most from the ‘area for development’ and it is these that I will concentrate on. The main areas he mentions are:

  • Potential to focus on specific issues for future projects
  • Expand research and practice of collage for future assignments
  • Continue to develop critical reading pertinent to the specific project
  • Reference this in my Learning Log

I will attempt to address these as the course progresses.

I also need to review Assignment 2 and delete a couple of images that might be seen as “repetitious and do not indicate a decisiveness in selection for presentation”.